Mirage Poem by Sreelakshmi Revikumar

Mirage

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You are so far, my dear
With ocean between us today.
To be near and close to you,
I meditate a thousand years.
Still you are so far, so long.

My breathe and my soul
Keeps beating in your memories.
I'm loving you, a -
Thousand births and more.
I dbout on your existence.

What if you are my dream?
Or am I a stranger to you?
Unknown, to the universe
Known only to you,
Are you a mirage, I wonder.

Wednesday, December 5, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: existence,love,memories,mirage,mystic,soul,waiting,years
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Love may feel mystic at times. It's magical.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prabir Gayen 16 February 2019

What if you are my dream? Or am I a stranger to you? Unknown, to the universe Known only to you, Are you a mirage, I wonder.... ...I like these beautiful line

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Sreelakshmi Revikumar 22 February 2019

Mirages makes us feel something which may not be possible in real life. Whatever comes unexpected could be considered as a mirage. I feel delughdel to hear that you have enjoyed my poem dear Prabir

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Srijita Mondal 15 February 2019

Very beautiful poem..Love is always spiritual..when Love deepens it becomes Worship..Longing is very beautiful part of Love..it strengthens Love💚 Your poet's note is also very nice 💛

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Sreelakshmi Revikumar 15 February 2019

Dear poet, it's so nice to hear from you... Equally happy to know your thoughts on love

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Jazib Kamalvi 15 February 2019

A nice poem, Sreelakshmi. Read my poem Love and L u s t. Thanks.

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Sreelakshmi Revikumar 15 February 2019

Dear poet, I feel happy to know that you took the time to read my poem. I'll read yours and let you know about it soon.

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