Midnight Sun Poem by Robert Miller

Midnight Sun

Rating: 5.0


our friendship was designed with nine lives
you have ruined eight and a half so far
you keep torturing me with needles and knives
but I’m not going to wear a single scar

cause you have never known what I feel
i decided to trade a betrayer for a friend
sure I thought that was a hell of deal
but all my friends are betrayers in the end

this is where it started, this is where it ends
are we really condemned to be just friends?
flames to dust, and lovers to friends
are you sure that this is how it ends?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jerry Hughes 16 November 2008

............nice flow of words, well done

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Kevin Eaglesfield 16 November 2008

Pain and bravado in equal measures.Know its bite.Like this poem.Regards.Kev

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