Meteroric Love. Poem by Fay Slimm

Meteroric Love.

Rating: 5.0


Short but torrid their romance.
Lit the heavens every night.
If given only half a chance,
It would have set the world alight.

Meteoric was their love.
Fate began it from afar.
For them it never had to prove
It was sent from destiny's star.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.subhendu Kar 04 November 2009

Lit the heavens every night. If given only half a chance, It would have set the world alight.....love enlightens in resplendence, ingenious write,10+++, thanks for sharing

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Carol Gall 22 October 2009

you said it all fay 10

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Sandra Martyres 22 October 2009

Short and sweet and a delight to read Fay...10

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Ian Bowen 22 October 2009

Fay, short, sweet, and very neat. Solid piece of work.10/10 Regards, Ian

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Catrina Heart 22 October 2009

wow what a love and what a poem............meteor showers all night!

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