Metamorphosis Poem by Sonny Rainshine

Metamorphosis

Rating: 5.0


Chrysalis: jade pendant,
suspended in the wind
from a dill weed stem
like a Chinese lantern.

Beauty concentrated,
compressed,
bottled up,
wired to explode.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Martin A. Ramos 30 April 2006

Fine poem, Sonny. Excellent imagery. You might consider writing it as 2 stanzas of four lines each. The second stanza could read: Beauty concentrated, compressed, bottled up, wired to explode.

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