Haiku: Hail Storm Poem by Sonny Rainshine

Haiku: Hail Storm

Rating: 5.0


Pearls from a necklace
slipping off a severed string:
a sudden hail storm

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Goldy Locks 24 May 2006

this one really got me. great haiku, Sonny. best care, Sus.

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Ernestine Northover 14 May 2006

A good write, Haikus and Senryus are not easy. Nice one. Love Ernestine XXX

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Richard Cock III 14 May 2006

yay! someone who can actually write a great haiku! yay! !

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Duncan Wyllie 14 May 2006

You have such insight, I love this one, so visual, Love Duncan X

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