Messed Up Poem by Charlotte M.
Messed Up
In my messed up world,
the falling went up,
and the forward traveled backwards.
The world turned flat,
and the ocean, green.
Fish walked,
and birds swam.
The sun was for night,
and the moon for day,
and the stars came in for dinner
In my messed up world.
Charlotte, I love the style and meaning in your poem. I do have one correction: after ‘the stars came in for dinner' there doesn't need to be a period since the next line is the same sentence. Otherwise it's great! You're very talented!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/17/2024 6:08:40 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Maybe put a comma there instead of the period - sorry lol