Menacing Poem by Amitava Sur

Menacing

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The more it will be distancing
The more it will be hitting you hard
It will become more sweet and firm.

The only thing that behaves such -
Is none but the MENACING LOVE! ! !
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Amitava (1.10.2015) 7-00am

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Menacing
Thursday, October 1, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amitava Sur 07 October 2015

Thank you Marie for reading my poem and making such a valued and detailed comment with depth which inspires me to write something more with more merit and substance in my future writings. Thanks again.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 01 October 2015

Verily, a truth of human psyche.

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Amitava Sur 07 October 2015

Thanks a lot.

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Amitava Sur 07 October 2015

Thank you for liking my penning.

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Kelly Kurt 01 October 2015

Intense. A very passionate view. Thanks, Amitava

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 October 2015

It will become more sweet and firm. The only thing that behaves such - Is none but the MENACING LOVE! ! ! .... true dictum. A beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Amitava Sur 07 October 2015

Thank you for your lovely comment.

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