Me Too Poem by Amitava Sur

Me Too

Rating: 4.3


Me too aspire to live further
And that too for a long long time
Here on this lively green planet,
But in an open air
With complete fairness and freedom.

Where there will be -
No race
No caste
And no color bar nor any hitch!

Where there will be
No boundary
No barbed obstacle
On this bustling and lively green earth.

Dreaming a world with least disparity
And brotherhood as a pride and priority
With no hatred anymore,
I'm longing to belong here in galore.

I'd like to float around
To get lost in the bounty of beauties here..
I'd like to sink in deep
To stand by their side who all are sinking.

I intend to be swayed and flown away
with all their sweat and blood who toil
To reach the outfall at the end
Along with all of them.

Me too aspire to live further
And that too for a long long time
Here on this lively green planet,
But in an open air
With complete fairness and freedom.
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Amitava (17.10.19)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Suresh Kumar Ek 17 September 2020

what a beautiful poetic dream

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Khairul Ahsan 08 March 2020

To live in a planet without borders, without any hindrance to movement, without any disparity among fellow men is also an aspiration I live with and dream of.

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Navod Dilhara 30 November 2019

Liberty, if I may assert. Finely composed. Thanks for publishing,

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Ratnakar Mandlik 23 October 2019

A beautiful life song aspiring for universal brotherhood and an era of love, equality and freedom. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Chinedu Dike 23 October 2019

A fine and lofty verse, well conceived and nicely brought forth in persuasive poetic expressions with conviction. An insightful rendition calling for universal brotherhood of man. Thanks for sharing.

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