Melting Light Poem by Nilima Deb
Melting Light
I eye you
behind the nudes of the dying light!
The dark water is sucking the muted sky,
you breathe inside!
Canopy above
lost in sight!
I feel more azures
And the final notes you left unhooked...
Six a.m,
I could better mind,
the silence of the rustling silk;
on the spots of yellow lights lying in the bed
growing fade ……………
I eye you behind the nudes of the dying light! I could better mind, the silence of the rustling silk; yellow lights........ a very nice poem a poem of desire hidden in nice words.... tony
A beautiful image fondling with all senses, Nilima. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks
The silence of the rustling silk motivates yellow light is amazing. The dark water holds its reflection to turn light rays in to golden colour. An amazing and brilliant imagery is drawn here.10
(part 2) Images of the like, : : notes you left unhooked: : : : silence of the rustling silk; ; ; : : growing fade: : : are really exquisite, unique! ! A lovely, humble 100+++
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4/27/2024 10:30:58 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Hi Nilima, A very beautiful, metaphoric and poignant poem. Fantastic choice of vocabulary, conjugation of words- right from the name of the poem, Melting Light. Wow! ! ! The opening lines, : : I eye you : : behind the nudes of the dying light! : : conjure up a totally etherial image, a rarified atmosphere. : : The dark water is sucking the muted sky, : : you breathe inside! : : phrases like DARK WATER and MUTED SKY disturb the reader, perturb his conscience, haunt him.. Congrats...