A Ambiguous Music Of Love Poem by Nilima Deb
A Ambiguous Music Of Love
Still could feel the saccharine notes
played on the alluring eyes where I lost myself
for a while.
It flattered the vanity of the mysterious silence
I wished to last long!
The innocence psyche of a stranger
enthralled the shadow of a crimson light,
shinning towards a unknown desire.
But time flies...
before could open the door of a shadowy charisma,
a ray of canon coalesced into a flash called alter ego.
Everything redesigned here after
and a new hail embellished a new sky.
The essence of the rain drops
introduced with the new river passed nearby.
I became totally bewildered
may be was missing the passionate silence,
that was whispering a lot without making any noise.
A ambiguous music of love
was drifting on the ocean of my heart.
And finally the fragrance of moderated emotion
propelled me to sink into the depth of the river.
Still the river is flowing
and am too with all its up and downs.
I don't know about those eyes;
either closed or hold the story still alive!
Wish them a happy journey with new sight
to greet the soul and heart without any finest sacrifice.
Hi Nilima, A very poignant poem. A hard look at this wonderful phenomenon called Life. I became totally bewildered may be was missing the passionate silence, that was whispering a lot without making any noise. Everyone stands bewildered on the shores of this intrigue-LIFE. Still the river is flowing and am too with all its up and downs. I don't know about those eyes; either closed or hold the story still alive! As Dharmaputra says in Mahabharata in spite of all the vagaries of life, though we can not fathom what the very next second holds for us, all of us so passionate of life. We scheme, plan, expect, love adore, adorn..... What an intrigue! ! ! ! I do not find another word that suits here. Great poem Nilima.10++++
thank you so much for your inspiration and nice wording...my regards
A ambiguous music of love was drifting on the ocean of my heart. And finally the fragrance of moderated emotion propelled me to sink into the depth of the river. Beautiful write by imagery! 10+, thanks for sharing
Love.....ambiguous......it appears often....great..you have not fallen into its clutches.....but with the passage of time it appears funny.....against this background you exercise your pen to recollect something.....which has found expression in your emotional write.....lovely musings...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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A nice poetic imagination, Nilima. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks