Meet Me In A Dream Poem by Nika McGuin

Meet Me In A Dream

Rating: 4.8


Meet me in a dream,
my bittersweet moonbeam.
It's noon, I think of you
and ah...you're farther than you seem

Meet me in a dream.
One where there are no words -
where our feelings bip and bop like jazz tunes.
As the sun rises, thoughts of you fall heavy on my heart.

Meet me in a dream
to lighten this heavy load of guilt.
For I'm the one who went away
and our distance is growing by the day.

Meet me in a dream!
Because I miss you too much
and this loneliness is like a wound in my heart -
deepening each day we are apart.

Monday, May 25, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: far,loneliness,lonely,longing,miss you,missing,missing you
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 01 September 2020

'As the sun rises, thoughts of you fall heavy on my heart.' - A beautiful expression! 'For I'm the one who went away and our distance is growing by the day' - this sense of guilty feeling has produced a beautiful poem. Hope you have overcome the guilty feeling by expiating and the person truly appeared in your dream.

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Tom Billsborough 29 June 2020

Meet me in a dream. A dream of a poem. bip and bob of Jazz tunes. love that line, Nika. Good poem

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Michaelw1two 25 May 2020

Aloha Nika and Cheers! Caught your latest post and took the plunge... Nice word work! You wright? My question... why guilt? read me... I, will to read more of you... All of the best from this life, to you, and to all of our relations... Michaelw1two

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Nika Mcguin 27 May 2020

Thanks Michael! I'll be sure to take a look at your poetry.

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