Me And My Love Poem by ramesh rai

Me And My Love



Me and my love are integral
can not be imagined ignoring one

If i am the sun she is the rays
if i am the moon she is the canopy
if i am the sky she is the earth
if i am the flower she is the pollen
if i am the green valley she is the green radiance

If i am the dew she is the petal
holding me safely in her bosom

If i am the cascade she is the music
flowing with melodious song in my life

If i am the breeze she is the frigidity
if i am the candle she is the light
if i am the light she is my shadow.

Saturday, June 20, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akachukwu Lekwauwa 20 June 2015

The flow at some point was awesome, but I would've loved it better if it had ended with a rhythm as those of the two line stanzas.

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