Marrige You Wanna? Poem by Aden Orie
Marrige You Wanna?
these past few years
have flew on by
its because of me
and my getting high
the feeling rushes
into my brain
i flew into the air
on coarse to never return again
the smoke arises
my mary jane
marrige you wanna?
this marrige is plain
its got taste
its got smell
its got comfort and joy
not as i was
when i was a boy
You
coral bateman
accept me for all that i am
all that i do
all that ive done
you love me regardless
i wish we could be together
how i hate that we are apart
while mary janes in my brain
you are in my heart.
well, the poem is nicely done...my goshhhhhhhh, hope ur not using mari juana my dearest...
Love and its lost? wasted opportunity? Due to drug taking? ? ? I find it sad maybe its anout sadness
Read your poem and found myself reading it again to try and read between your lines. Whoever, Mary-Jane is must be what is on your brain and who is in your heart is Love? Love is something you take a chance on when you let your heart rule your head. As you get older you learn this, so entering contact of marraige is what is in your head. Finding one that is in your head and heart is priceless. Liked your peom. Having to read a poem again after the first read is a good peom when it held your interest on the first read. Don't cloud the head though too much it will make you lazy, , , .
this poem has alot of emotions in it and i dont know how but, i really love this peom because its just naturally lovely.
Smoke, brother and keep your lovely lady in your heart. Good read.
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I would like to translate this poem
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5/10/2024 8:44:12 PM # 1.0.0.1119
really nice and it luks like it came from u heart.