Limitations Poem by Aden Orie

Limitations

Rating: 4.3


Do not look too far into me
For when it breaks down,
It is darkness you will see,
The outter me,
Who ever,
What ever i want to be,
But in my core,
Theres a part,
Thats not to bright,
Im this amazing boy,
And i know it well,
But look a bit deeper,
Its not to swell,
Clear away the cobbwebs,
Sweep up the dirt,
The spider in the corner,
The heart that is constantly in hurt.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chatara Conway 24 April 2009

This poem talks about the pain you have that won't go away. I understand Thanks for sharing!

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