### Marieta Maglas’s Eye Poem by sarwar chowdhury

### Marieta Maglas’s Eye

Rating: 3.1


Aesthetically pleasing indeed her eye!
Empowered with judiciousness!
Unparalleled, classic love imbued
The sensing element!
Awesome beauty detector!

It looks on what? Towards timelessness!
How far the vision can travel upon?
Ancient Greek myths to long past Indian instances,
Galaxy to galaxy, universe to universe
Touch off her eye pleasurably I think!
I wonder, how sweetly able to get into
The world of spiritual luminosity!
Cryptic, cryptic beauty the eye!

Yes, a phenomenal woman’s eye it is
Sacred light of love mingled.
Devotedness and intellect
Linked up with. Substantive.
That’s why her eye could capture-
The ‘Dance of love’ ‘Human sacrifices (Rituals) ’
‘Let's make love tonight’ ‘Eternity of silence’
‘Whispering Spirits serenade me’and so on.

Powerful the eye can scan info-beauty
Through the words Romanian English
French Italian And Spanish.
Who can say –
How much beauty can discover the poetic and noetic eye!

On Rosa canina-edelweiss’s face,
Heavenly smile inflorescence
Whilst the eye very touchingly view of! And the willow tree
Branches oscillate with joy! The Golden eagle astonished!

Hence
I see, the music of mozart applause gleefully
Brilliant wordsmith Marieta Maglas’s eye!

Long live dear Mari! Long live Marieta Maglas!
A fantastic human being!
Suceava, Romania and we are proud of you!


(Notes: Rosa canina-edelweiss is national flower of Romania. Willow tree is a legendary tree in Romania and Romanian national bird is the Golden eagle. Suceava is her hometown)

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mamta Agarwal 01 June 2010

you have captured the essence and range of her work, not to mention the persona.we get a glimpse of her in her work. very talented, unapologetic, lovely woman to know. read and see through her inner eye. she takes you along her journey into a metaphysical world. indeed a great tribute to a fine poet, Sarwar. it shows your poetic talent. Mamta

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Allemagne Roßmann 02 June 2010

Tell her in her eyes latino i see my day pass me in gulasch and wuertchen and lost in a lost Casino She is the foamy fog of my pint of Oettinger And when one day my teeth require the dentures sand speech hope she comes like a gypsy and say I am Marieta(Mari + eta(in russian meaning this is) and a doctor Laugh and die ho for the latin Aerztin. 10+++for Marieta and Sarwar cinematography

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Priyambada Chatterjee 02 June 2010

It looks on what? Towards timelessness! How far the vision can travel upon? ..... Recognizing someone so beautifully! ...very spontaneous writing....

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Anjali Sinha 03 June 2010

wowwwwwwww great to the detector of Marie's eyes of love an intricate poem perfectly crafted by superman Sarwar in his own unique style 10+ to both Sarwar and Marieta

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Sarwar Chowdhury 01 June 2010

Some comments on this poem came in the poetfreak.com as follows- Sana Rose Your words are so strong! she must be feeling proud! Jon London Such a wonderful and fitting tribute to a first class poetess my friend..Your words sing through this poetic golden shrine...well penned Buddy..I always enjoy your work Sarwar...keep up the fine writing my friend :) magnolia a wonderful tribute to such a fine lady...Maggie carol a great tribute to a great poet well written Karin Anderson An absolutely stunning poem sarwar and you have provided so much information in an artistic and creative way and I can see how Marieta appreciates your dedication. This poem can be read over and over again as there is so much to absorb. Glorious writing... Susan Jarvis I wasn't familiar with poetic journalism until you asked me to read this, and what a magniloquent tribute to a fellow poetfreak, simply bursting with figurative language and praise. :) Claire Bircher A wonderful tribute to a wonderful poet, this is so well thought out and put together and including the notes at the end is a fantastic idea for those of us not in the know :) beautiful Sarwar :) Knight of the House of Lancaster SAWAR - This is an amazing tribute to a very competant and acomplished poet. I concur with every word you have written. We are very very fortunate to have poetesses of the calibre of Marieta as members of Poetfreak. Thank you for caring and sharing - Yours through poetry - JOHN. Marieta Maglas I feel very honored to be included in your poetry and I feel very honored because one of world's greatest poets appreciates my work.Thank you very much for the dedication.The poem is extraordinary and I merely express my appreciation for your talent.I'm so happy, you make my day wonderful, thank you again....Mari Munia Khan Wow! ! Looks like you have gathered a lot of information here on Romania as well.And what a fantastic tribute to a fantastic poetess.I love her work so much and this is a superb work to honour such a talented poetess.Fatntastic Sarwar. Marie Shine This is a very beautiful and well deserved tribute to a wonderful poetess and PF friend, Sarwar. Marieta will now have eternal glory and live on through the words of your very finely crafted poem, filled with stunning visual detail and so delightfully expressed. Thank you so very much for sharing Sarwar. I have enjoyed reading this very fine poem very much. Beautiful work! sridevi wow! ! ! ! Sarawar such a wonderful tribute to our wonderful poet friend....you just etrenalised her beauty here.....thank you for sharing... Mubeen Sadhika Great tribute to Marieta. Good work. Excellent imagination. Flowing thought. Beautifully written. Fay Slimm What a fine tribute to an outstanding poet Sarwar - - extensive use of comparison and beautiful phrasing will be a delight to Marieta. tom A wonderful tribute to a wonderful poet, well done Sawar.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 February 2018

TWO: Oh, how magnificent is that. I have enjoyed very much your fascinating words about MM. A tremendously gifted piece of poetic journalism, Sarwar. I have read the comments from PF poets, so good you copied their comments, because PF does not exist anymore since the 31st of December 2016. I will message you about this.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 February 2018

ONE: Most attractive Tribute to Marieta Maglas's Eye. This was posted in Poetfreak one year before I entered PF. What a time and what a drama after that. BUT this I just read it now and I come to the conclusion that a talented poetess is found by a talented poet.

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Very well put together poem. Strong write. Well done.

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Indira Babbellapati 06 June 2010

a great dedication...

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Emma Adamyan 05 June 2010

what can say one woman reading a dedication to another woman... I AM jealous! ! ! :) now seriously... fantastic and brilliant work. According by the famous Merelin`s song U gave to Mari another best friend :)

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