Make It Stop Poem by Aksel Godtfred

Make It Stop



stop cure the tears the pain why abuse a child when it haven't done you anything why rase you're hand only to use it to hurt the one you're supose to love the one that was you're choice to make? then you cry when they bring out a knife and start showing you the scares you made them make?
how can you put so mutch anger and hate in something you have create? how can you look someone in the eye's and tell them that they'r mean so much to them and you will keep them in you're life until the day you die?

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
so some thoughts i made today of seeing a little girl cry and her mom just stood there yelling at her
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aksel Godtfred 04 July 2012

Thanks for the criticism but i can't write in my own language.. i don't know how to express my self in my own language..

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Ralph The Elf 04 July 2012

i like the story but i believe you would have written marvelously in your own language...Bravo

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