Existing, brings boredom
Reachable, reaches saturation
Accessible, kills adventure
On hand, attracts apathy
Obtainable, looses credentials
Available, no more in need.
Now self delve for a MAGIC.
Nonexistent, illustrates a landscape
Unreachable, apprehends succinct
Inaccessible, loads thrill
Dearth, yearns for glutted enthusiasm
Distant, appears magnanimous
Mirage, burnish soul with a demand.
MAGIC spell eclipses substance of life.
Magic has no power to heal
It’s an illusion of impossible
An entertainment not a solution.
Sleight of hand hides secrets
Countless enigma strains life
Can’t we live with tangibles?
Don’t jeopardize life for sake of this MAGIC.
[Sleight - is the set of techniques used by a magician to manipulate objects such as cards and coins secretly]
-vidi-
13-06-08
mind's quests in search of those umpteenth 'un...' make the life magical and worth living...10
Vidi! i am in awe of you! such voluptuous use of the English language! i am a devoted fan, regards Bob
yes, when boredom sets in we look for excitement. that too doesn't last long.magic is an illusion.
'Magic has no power to heal It’s an illusion of impossible An entertainment not a solution. Sleight of hand hides secrets Countless enigma strains life Can’t we live with tangibles? ' Truly expressed the idea in the last stanza, love it-10+++
Magic ofcourse is entertainment as you've put it....your language is amazing...thank you Vidi...kindly read my Aurobindo-3...if only you 've time....you may like it...thank you
Magic has no power to heal It’s an illusion of impossible An entertainment not a solution. Sleight of hand hides secrets Countless enigma strains life Can’t we live with tangibles? -------- Fabulous written composition...well implied thought! ! ! 10/10
Let's say that the magic in your poem represents the easy way out which is truly an illusion. There are many people who want to make it in life desperately or who would want anything to deal with their problems easily. They are seeking the easy way out, they do not want to go through stress and all that. Then one again has to be distinct, loving, patient, determined, hardworking, sincere, jovial, happy and remain positive at all things to make it in life. Good job there, Vidi.
You have expressed a very crucial and true idea in your poem..There is another, divine kind of magic that is Love itself. Those with empty hearts are searching desperately to fill their hearts with some substitute for love, magic is one of them and it is an illusion that seems to 'fill' a heart for some time but ends in vain, boredom and disappointment.Thanks for sharing and best wishes :) A.
Yes magic is really all illusion, a sleight of hand, a mystery to be solved. But it is in the striving to solve the complexities of life that we gain. The everyday run of mill things that bore us, also feed and comfort us as well. It is in a compromise between the ordinary and the extraordinary we should use life's playground, but only for the benefit of all. Vida you write good thought provoking poetry which I enjoy.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Magic in magical words hipnotising the readers ........good one