...Lying Dormant Poem by Sarvesh Kulkarni

...Lying Dormant

Rating: 5.0


The entire expanse-leaf of ether, thrilled,
with one dewdropp of eternity.

The sunlight of infinite life,
finds its refuge,
in the recluse
of one teardropp of timelessness.

and thus pass
eons of time,
as the birth-pangs,
seeking the ineffables,
for one truthful moment of absolution.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 22 August 2009

amazing and interesting opus........well done! 10

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Seema Aarella 22 August 2009

Lofty, Lofty, Lofty with splendid sprinkling of some superb imagery! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Indira Babbellapati 22 August 2009

a poet by instict and an engineer by training...that's sarvesh!

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Kesav Easwaran 22 August 2009

Work done is equal to force multiplied by lever arm...the Force by itself is dormant...the Encouragement once came out of the Force, does all the work in the presence of the dormant Force...you have good thinking mind...poetically expressive...10

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Vaibhav Pandey 23 August 2009

an excellent piece sarvesh....brilliantly expressed...I loved it..10

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Brishti Mazumdar 31 August 2009

for one truthful moment of absolution. ..Yes...everything is meant for that....So nice.....

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Maitreyee Joshi 30 August 2009

dormant, but with so much substance.beautiful!

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Rajaram Ramachandran 28 August 2009

A dewdropp deserves so much praise from the young poet.

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Anjali Sinha 27 August 2009

yeah yours is like a bud that was dormant but now bursting forth in full glory lovely to read anjali

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Ted M 27 August 2009

Brilliant write..........................10

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