Luna And The Fourteen Shrews Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

Luna And The Fourteen Shrews

Rating: 4.7


a story poem from a while ago

it is of course again about Luna,
the cat from the neighbourhood (1.5 km away from us)
I don't remember the exact date and time,
the total number of mice she brought to our terrace is fourteen fourteen shrews, fourteen fragile mice, but adult mice,
caught not in one day, of course,
spread over several days,

they say Luna considers me her boss, but I don't need mice!
Did she catch them one by one in the farmer's field?
I don't know until now.

She then only slept on our terrace, not in our house,
but almost every day she came with a mouse,
with a dead mouse on our patio,
it looks like it smiles or grins at us,
it's called a shrew I think,
I'm not sure, but at least not a rat,
that dear Luna could be so cruel, I hadn't known,

as long as the mouse is not dead yet,
it will always get a thump from Luna.
At that time it was almost every day
that I had to take the victim to the municipal waste,
well, I had to, because I didn't want that in my own container,

I first took off my work gloves,
wrapped the victim in a plastic bag
and another bag over that and
then I went by car to the municipal container,

I've never studied cats, why don't they eat their victim?
I did the same thing fourteen times,
Luna hadn't done it every day,
but I had taken fourteen in total.
I'm sure Luna was lurking on the farm
trying to make it clear to me that she considers me her boss.
After fourteen shrews, nothing more came.
A deep sigh of relief

©Sylvia Frances Chan - All Rights Reserved
First of July 2023

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
this is a story-poem from some time ago. Luna brought me 14 shrews, caught at the farmer's field and she brought to me considering me as her boss, a heavy task my side to put away the dead shrew, in total 14 dea mice spread over several weeks, that was only one period, if Luna did that longer, I think she was not welcome anymore on our terrace, since I regard mice/shrews especially when they are dead, very dirty. Thank you so much for co-reading with us, heary greetings from the Netherlands, Sylvia Frances Chan
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 01 July 2023

Very enjoyable. But why fourteen? Nicely written. Thanks for sharing.

0 0 Reply
Rajan T Renganathan 02 July 2023

You are bossing a cat now. Ha ha ha good poem.

0 0 Reply
Sylvia Frances Chan 01 July 2023

Asjemenou! Veertien spitsmuizen aangesleept voor Sylvia, wat een kat die Luna!

0 0 Reply
Denis Mair 01 July 2023

I think your Kitty Gaga is providing a great service: she is nature's enforcer, helping you prevent a field-mice population bomb!

0 0 Reply
Denis Mair 01 July 2023

The cat has gone gaga over you. In it's eyes, you are not just a boss, you are like a queen!

0 0 Reply
Denis Mair 01 July 2023

I think those little field mice have a beneficial role to play. By eating grubs, they probably prevent an excess of insects. How amazing that the cat wants to show its devotion this way!

0 0 Reply
Sylvia Frances Chan

Sylvia Frances Chan

Jakarta, Indonesia
Close
Error Success