Love Profound Poem by T.James Becker

Love Profound

Rating: 5.0


As she walks along barren ground,
Flowers develop beneath her feet
Yellow daffodils surround
And rise up from concrete

The air is the essence of holidays
Exuberance to all abounds
Through her magic gateway
Hear the melodious sounds

Electricity courses through me
Charged with shear delight
A kiss from her and I am free
To heaven, my heart takes flight

Like fairy dust sprinkled on my head
My feet never touch the ground
I am drowning but do not dread
For it is in her love profound.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alicia Cobian 01 October 2008

this is really sweet! i love the way you expressed ur feelings during a kiss.

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Nia Riz 29 September 2008

aaww......sweet and cute and a good way to express your love...good words you have used....luvd it vry much

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 27 September 2008

Great, my friend. This is something from personal experience, isnt it? Wonderful. Thank you.

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Viola Grey 20 September 2008

just when I was ready to snap loves scrawny neck...this gives me some hope...beautiful work

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T.James Becker

T.James Becker

Prescott Arizona
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