Love Or Love Poem by Denvor fernandez

Love Or Love

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Love, are you the one?
Who burns inside eloping couples,
Cries after the lost ones,
Springs revenge in on being jilted,
Fills the brain with wild emotions.
Wild self-destructive emotions.

Love, are you lust?
which fires the world with energy,
Forces people into that divine touch
which makes them hate.
A hate which makes them angry
A lifelong self-destructive anger.

Love, can we make you
on bed with our loving hearts,
filling our blood with heat,
touching deeper and deeper,
kissing deeper and deeper,
which finally will make us multiply.

Love, can you be kind
As you are? Can you bring the
World together? Can you?
Can you make us reach God?
Who you are, after all.
Do you cry? Do you laugh?

Love, are you the one?
who brought Jesus into this world.
You taught us peace,
patience, joy and gentleness.
Charity, faith and piety.
But you are still a mystery.

Love, are you Jesus?
You are not envious,
boastful, arrogant or rude.
You do not do evil.
You are the truth
which will save all.

Lets make love.
Lets make Love.

Monday, February 9, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 09 February 2009

perfect, thats all I can say; ; ; ; ; this poem is great.nice job

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Nidhi Dev 09 June 2011

Superb! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Rachel Butler 28 October 2009

'You taught us peace, patience, joy and gentliness' Rachel Ann Butler

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April Rose Sta Cruz 27 July 2009

nice and well written keep up the good work

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Lalitha iyer 10 February 2009

Dear denny, Love is beautiful when innocence rules. When intentions compete, no love is there but pre-meditated actions. Actions and love could not be confused.Love is an Abstract Noun. It could not be followed by a conditional verb. Love should be unconditioned by time, space and....... Love is the end of love, not the means to joy time bound. Love unconditional is love of innocence. Love is beautiful only when mens rea is not there. When there is no hormonal compulsion to do or not to do something that makes or mar the beauty of love, then love becomes divine. Love is in the suffering and kindled by compassion and kindness. It is selfless surrender to the aches and pains of other's desperate state of pain. In love you are the god and not the dog to litter. Littering and puppying and multiplication and all is because of intended actions of man or woman, if you would please. By the way, your poetry is very good by way of style, but by way of content you should know better. Don't be confused between the common man's idiocy thinking love and actions that adheres to love as same.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 09 February 2009

L onging O r V anished E go

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Palakkad, Kerala, India
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