Love, Obsession And Hatred Poem by Jaya Das
Love, Obsession And Hatred
Love, hatred and obsession, closely akin
The line of separation stands very thin.
Leaped over another, you not even realize
That moment when, love became despise.
Running in stride, astray you lead
The rose in the garden turns out to be weed.
In quest of love, always deemed to win
You never know, indeed you have committed a sin.
Love is an energy, not an invasion
It can't be destroyed, has no creation.
If you deliberately imbue seeds of affection
The hem of love disappears, heart dives into obsession.
When epiphany of losing strikes the mind
Hatred emanates that makes you blind.
Love blows away, specks of hatred tatter your heart
You never paused to realize when did it start.
The infection of love cures your heart, charred
Love can only be transmitted, it can never get marred.
(cont.) ..ok, so you mentioned all three key words of the title. GOOD. // specks of hatred tatters your heart..i'd type specks...tatter..., not tatters // to be ware when perhaps to beware when or be aware of when? // charred/marred, very nice! to MyPoemList. bri :)
(continued) .. some suggestions etc.; take them or leave them: You never know, indeed you have committed a sin. i would shorten with you've. hem? as in hemmed in/confined? do the boundaries (the hem) of love dissolve? (continued) ..
love cannot be destroyed; it can only blow away and be transmitted! some interesting thought done her, .....and rhyming. MY 'love' has been transmitted several times, from girl to woman to woman, and on and on and on. BUT there is a second love i have..........for ice cream. a little sometimes blows towards cake, but most of it is devoted to ice cream, and never leaves. (continued) ..
A nice poetic imagination, Jaya. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks
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4/25/2024 12:13:57 PM # 1.0.0.1119
your poetry is good but with age you will come to know what now i say read it please Love, combine and differentiate with LUST hatred INNER dimension of jealous as it bursts and obsession, ==EGO NARCISSISM and see the difference compose anther one Jaya my younger poet kid for me may be gc