Love Love Love Poem by Michael Shepherd

Love Love Love

Rating: 3.2


Oh it's so easy to say -

'Give what you think you lack -
You feel unloved? Then give love, and love, and love...'...

On the other hand -
Do you have any better advice?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 27 January 2017

An insightful piece on love elegantly brought forth in good diction with conviction.

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DorcusEvelyn Mbaruku 07 March 2017

It had me at "do you have any better advice?? "A perfect rhetorical question that clearly elaborates non is fulfilling as love, great work

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Chinedu Dike 24 May 2015

Beautiful train of thoughts, well articulated and subtly penned with conviction. A lovely piece of poetry bristling with insight. A powerful message indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.10/10.

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F J Thomas 31 July 2014

lol I'm not sure I'd want any more advice from them Michael. Love how you've played this short ;)

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Neil Stewart Mcleod 05 May 2018

It is hard to say there is better advice than loving. - Mark12: 31

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Good poem. But not worth to be reckoned among the Best Poems at all. PoemHunter should remove it from the BestPoemsList

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Ruth Walters 26 April 2023

This poem brought a smile to my face. It's wise advice as if you give love, you'll be loved in return in most instances but it neglected to say that if you keep loving, when love isn't returned, then stop and find other friends.

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Suryendu Chaudhury 24 September 2020

Sarcastic and funny too.

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SUSAN SMALLS 28 June 2020

WE LOVE SOME ONE IS THAT KISSYOU

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Richard Antwi 22 June 2020

'Love, it's so easy to say' Nice expression, well done Mark Read my poems and give comments on poem hunter.

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Michael Shepherd

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