Love Like A Leaf (Tanka) Poem by Jesus Diaz Llorico

Love Like A Leaf (Tanka)

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"Our love's like a leaf
being soaked by the soft rain
until one forgets
that from steady showering
no one can see it's weeping."

Wednesday, June 27, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 28 June 2018

Our love's like a leaf being soaked by the soft rain until one forgets that from steady showering no one can see it's weeping. - - - - - Such a beautiful Tanka! ! !

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Jesus Llorico 29 June 2018

Thank you Ms Bharati Nayak, really appreciate it.

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Chinedu Dike 27 June 2018

Well conceived and nicely encapsulated with insight. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing Jesus.

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Jesus Llorico 28 June 2018

Thank you for a very nice comment Mr Chinedu Dike really appreciate it.

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