Walk With Me Poem by Jesus Diaz Llorico

Walk With Me

Rating: 4.8


An empty road.... this peaceful night....
As evening breeze, blend with street lights

Though far are we, from city's glow
With only dunes and sands to show

Come, be with me, my fairest one
Let us walk this road, hand in hand

Then we will talk about the time
When we were young and in our prime

The crescent moon up in the sky
Will spread radiance for you and I

Tell me then, that moment arise
First time we meet, love in our eyes!

While this divine and gentle wind
Just lightly brush your lovely skin

Whisper me then, the simple truth
We're both in love, since time of youth

Our pleasant talk, gaze from afar
Your sparkling smile mix with the stars

Together we'll laugh, so much fun
The world will know that we are one!

For you and I, this walk entails
It's just seem, like some fairy tale

Though this dream, be out of the blue
I hope someday this will come true...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tim Shivers 22 September 2013

Inspiring beautiful artistic poem of joy and peace- -much enjoyment! ....

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Leonard Langberg 24 September 2013

Cool and interesting poem!

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Syd Barrett 25 September 2013

Beautiful. bellissimo! ! ! !

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Unwritten Soul 05 October 2013

Stuck with the feeling you left here..great best mark for u :) _Soul

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Zubiya Surti 28 May 2013

a very lovely poem, sir.thank you

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Dr Antony Theodore 24 August 2018

Our pleasant talk, gaze from afar Your sparkling smile mix with the stars Together we'll laugh, so much fun The world will know that we are one! ......whisper to me that we are in love......... thank u dear poet. tony

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Niken Kusuma Wardani 25 December 2015

So beautiful... hope your dream come true

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Khaoula Basty 25 December 2015

I hope it will come true Nice penned :) 10 Rate :)

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Ging Taping 15 September 2014

Full of hopes...someday soon it will happen.

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Roseann Shawiak 04 September 2014

Simply expressing a love you hope to have in the future is very beautiful, brought tears to my eyes because it is so endearing and tender. Fantastic poem, Jesus! ! Thank you for sharing your heart. RoseAnn

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