Love Ladden Lust Poem by Vizard Dhawan
Love Ladden Lust
I love you but fear
you might not bear
the burden of pleasure
I will provide you for sure
you are more than the world
for your touch and behold
I could do anything
for the happiness to bring
alas! you did't get me
and trying to be free
the love ladden lust
blew away in a gust
I liked this one too. You know most people here like the ending but I like the start. Look I love you but fear............................................ What? ? ? ? ? you might not bear..........................................Might not bear Love....! how? the burden of pleasure......hmmmmmmmmmmm Now clear you are going to give her every pleasure I will provide you for sure..................... Spectacular
rhapsodic like rap.... the rhythm is perfectly blended with the tone of the poem......speaks your craftsmanship.
This is a really good write, I loved the way it flows and it shows your emotions
Great write, I really enjoyed it, with great rhythm and flow!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/26/2024 5:01:03 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Well I think it was wonderful...Im still learning to be a poet myself...smiles...I have only been writing for 6 years now...so...yeah....its just become something that I live and breath for now...its like secound nature to me....mind cant stop thinking of poems...its like a creation of ideas and concepts just bursting fom my soul...smiles..sorry get so excited when talking about poetry....wonderful write...enjoy it so much...thank you for sharing.