Love Is Intrinsic In Creation Poem by shirin sheikhi

How true the statement in your title Shirin - - I like the way you used split lines and rhymed the last word on all three lines - - the subjects chosen were from the point ot you 'seeing' them - and it worked so very well... a tender picture penned of the 'love intrinsic in Creation'......10/10 from Fay

The fog cradled prairies And I saw it as a silver enigma hmm a perfect and written from the core of heart poem..wonderful and liked your talent and the way you write is intersting..reality based, romantic and the plea is remarkable..its really a great poem with rich idea...i give my favor what you said here, ..10/10

this si true..... good poetry shirin....