Love-Chords. Poem by Fay Slimm

Love-Chords.

Rating: 5.0


Like moonlit music-ensemble
.................................... playing soft chorus,
Love's notes catch fire,
............................... cut adrift, and soaring,
Shoot sound into my mind,
................................ rhythm starts pouring
Itself into my senses,
.................................... performs encores
Which vibrate to heated beats,
............................................. and descend
With swaying and sighs,
...................................... as violins unbend
Their love-chords toward
................................my heart with repeats
.Harmony rises again
......................................and soon defeats
Any resistance to
.................................... musical love-flight.
Nightime symphony
...........................blankets me with delight.

It orchestrates more
.............................. refrains easing
Bittersweet longing
....................... with exciting tease.

Passions' fulfillment
........................ relieves the lonely.
Amour's sweet rhapsody
............................. captures wholly.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Knight 19 November 2009

Hi Fay - an elegant poem - which plucked the strings of all our hearts with its gentle emotive language. The 'Fay Slimm Structure' is perfect for this poem. Lovely - TEN. Love you in Poetry - JOHN

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Georgia Girl 16 November 2009

oh this is GORGEOUS! ! love described as music...fantastic...10

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David Harris 15 November 2009

Fay they say that music is the food of love and you have demonstrated that well here. Top marks and thanks for sharing this with us my friend. Hugs David

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Daniel Kempson 15 November 2009

A very romantic write Fay captures the fullness of romance 10 Daniel

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