Love And Serve Poem by Subbaraman N V

Love And Serve

Rating: 5.0


God created man to love and serve
Love and serve all with strong nerve and verve
Expect not anything in return
Worry not over the strain that turn
Falter not over the goal you set
Tinker not with the grand steps you plan
Treat success and failure on even plane!

Success and failure sure part of our life
Success after failure sweeter still
Lessons you learn taller than a hill!

God's creations our great kith and kin
Deserve well to be cared, loved and served
Served to love and serve millions in turn
Drop of noble act in the sea of life!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Babbellapati 23 June 2008

i wish all youngsters will take a look at this poem of yours...

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Rema Prasanna 23 June 2008

Success and failure sure part of our life Success after failure sweeter still Lessons you learn taller than a hill! The above lines shows your great attitude towards life... there is enough and more in this write to learn 10+ I will add it as my favorite Rgs Rema

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Rajaram Ramachandran 23 June 2008

This good poem delivers a spiritual message for every one to follow. 'Love and Serve'

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Kesav Easwaran 23 June 2008

love is service and service is love...the message well brought out in this poem. it is of this reason some humans become great and get worshipped...

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Seema Chowdhury 23 June 2008

the opening lines are very catchy and impressive. thanks for sharing.

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Sherif Monem 19 November 2016

kith and kin. What is kith? Valuable reading.

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Abha Sharma 30 June 2008

the poem is not just for the youngsters but for all ages, we need to be reinforced time to time our duties as Man, The teachings of great saints and sages as told in our immortal texts, as in THE BHAGWAT GITA. all epitomised in these simple lines...again great thinking.. Abha

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Great voice throughout the poem, rightly justifying the sense of obvious logic that the world was made to serve. The purpose clear and crisp. Excellent work.

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Your pacificating tone, speaks morally, and with philosophically erudite logic. Very Nicely done, my friend! ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

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Cathleen Hodgkinson 23 June 2008

In such a 'Me First' world....every man, woman and child of every creed, religion and race should retain a copy of this poem...the message of the Universe is to 'love and serve'...not only God, but each other...What a beautiful world it would be.

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Subbaraman N V

Subbaraman N V

Karaikkudi - Tamilnadu- India
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