A House Wife's Prayer Poem by Subbaraman N V

Beautiful. Yet again you have created a unique flowing verse... this time with a definitive mood of happiness and hope... thankyou :)

This is really great... i luv the way u find hope and beauty in everthing being done... good job

Well structured verse with a great flow to it. Andrew

She is the mother sister friend teacher and guide.........all in one

Receptive work, does she get time to offer a prayer, loaded with mundane affairs, oh it is brilliant she feels for people around, prays for all, toils for all, bestow love and kindness, thank you for sharing this. A realistic great work

FAITH KEEPS THOSE THAT KEEP THE FAITH - Mother Teresa. A lovely poem well penned to capture its essence and the poet's fate, hope, aspirations, and total submission to the WILL OF GOD. I like the articulation of the poem. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

A very beautiful and realistic view of Motherhood, she is a teacher and has inner strength, sharpening minds and spirits at length. Really wonderful tribute to Mothers everywhere, you can tell this poem was written by a person with deeply held and felt convictions. Thank you for this gracious poem. RoseAnn

beautiful write.flow and wordplay is so sweet.liked it.

An adage in West Bengal, ‘there can be bad kids but never bad Mom’ …indeed Mother is all time greatest …great tribute to Mothers’ emotive side to all … thanks for sharing Hon’ble Poet Subbaraman-ji Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

I can very clearly relate to this prayer! Very well written. The last lines are the best: Grant me wisdom, love and patience Make my sweet home abode of Providence!