Love Poem by C. P. Sharma

that was a very nice poem about your love for her...

Without love our world would die, lets hope it stays breathes new life into an ever waiting world.

nice lines well crafted words good poetic sense sir i am not good enough to critique your writing skills, like you i am an ardent devotee of dattareya

wow..this is a nice and a well penned write. From the top to the bottom..and i just adore and love it. wonderful... Hugs, meggie

How very beautiul to see someone in love. A word, so very loaded, so very deep, an ocean that never dries, a wonder that never ends. Greetings for trying to capture this essence divine, I hope and wish it to become contagious one day. Well done! Regards

this is unique one about love sir.. you know many poets have tried to express their feelings or attitude to love, a great poet always try to do something innovative or express himself in a different way, this is nice write sir! ! 10++= with love shan

Flowing beautiful love poem all leading down to the last stanza of delightful words such as honey comb, lotus and love's red room. 10 Karin Anderson

very soft and smooth, i like it!

Such beauty of words dressed your lovely poem. Great end rhymes written...........10

May your love last forever and ever. Very sweet and lighthearted full of promise and hope for the future. '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn