Love Poem by Theodora (Theo) Onken

Love

Rating: 5.0


What is that magic energy we all feel?
......Much as a day in the warmth of the full sun
..........That simply radiates and tingles our senses
................You know that moment when two become one?
The moment of realization that we're where we're supposed to be
......Ambiance spreading it's fragrance of love through our very air
..........Opening up our eyes- - - - - -to perpetual azure blue skies
...............Touching our heart with unconditional care.

Opening our ears to loves gentle music
.......While the tasting of your lips most divine
...........What is that magic that simply suspends us?
................Eventually totally capturing our very minds
The answer is love - sweet - sweet love
.......And it has come at last to skeptical me
...........Knowing now that you are, indeed, the only one
................Knowing that we are so truly meant to be

Sunday, May 1, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: falling in love,love,true love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mj Lemon 10 June 2016

I love the line....opening our eyes....Without love, or without the promise of love, we are blind. This is an amazing work....

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Theodora Onken 16 June 2016

Mj, as always your kind words energize my spirit's. Thank you so much for this amazing review! ! ! !

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Susan Williams 03 June 2016

I like a poem that relaxes me in my chair and makes me smile a tender smile. Too often the television carries bad news, a friend calls with bad news, the neighbor yells at his kids or wife or dog.... it is good then to have love reaffirmed by a poet clearly and cozily in love! ! ! Thank you for sharing this sparkling gem of hope.

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Theodora Onken 16 June 2016

Susan, just now catching up with all my comments. Have been so delinquent and that is rude. So appreciate you reading and your always kind supportive words. Your views mean so much to me.

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Theodora Onken 16 May 2016

Sandra, what a nice surprise this is. Thank you so much for your kind words. Means a lot coming from a poet such as you!

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Sandra Feldman 15 May 2016

Very well done, Now we know, Love is the one the best there is Under the sun. Nice poems on love are hard to find, especially today, when even songs, nothing say. Thank you.

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