Love Poem by Preetam Shetty

Love

Rating: 4.8


Want to know who I am? ?

I am the music of Air
I am the flame of fire
I am the sanctity of earth
I am the universal worth
I am the mass and the matter
I am the purity of water
I am the dropp of shower
I am the fragrance of flower
I am the hymns of worship
I am the fruit of hardship
I am the catalyst to every gain
I am the sacrifice in every pain
I am the sweat of a father
I am the milk of a mother
I am the realization of bliss
I am the taste of the first kiss
I have seen every century
I dwell in everything you see
Every existence I adorn
I’ll still live for you; day you’re gone

I am Love

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lalitha iyer 13 May 2010

Want to know who am I? I am the twilight before the darkness I am the pink sky before the dawn I am the singing bird before its is aimed I am the speechless wonder in the mating of lightning and thunder..........

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Bhavik Bamania 04 June 2010

wonderful it just fantastic perfect expression with explanation in a short and sweet manner........wow i'm ur fan

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Ezna Stephna 25 May 2010

excellent..............well express in words.......................beautiful words used and very good ending `` I AM LOVE``...........10+++

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Gita Ashok 20 May 2010

Every existence I adorn I like this line the best. A very well-composed poem, indeed!

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Anonymous Butterfly 14 May 2010

I liked the lines: I am the purity of water I am the dropp of shower I am the fragrance of flower And: I am the taste of the first kiss I like the way you put this piece in order. By starting with air, fire, the music of life and continued by planting a flower and ended with love of mother and father. And then with the lines: I'll still live for you; day you're gone I am Love I really love it. A beautiful write. Have a nice day. B.B.

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Amrit Rathi 14 May 2010

Beautifully written, I really enjoyed it!

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