Love Poem by Dan Jordan

Love

Rating: 5.0


We should cherish and treasure the presence
Of love amongst our world, for it is the
Spectacular view of a beautiful sunset
Upon a mid-summers dust.

Love is the joy and gratitude of giving
And receiving the most lavish and
Luscious of presents upon Christmas
Day.

Love is the giving of small change to
A bewildered and forgotten Slums,
Of the bleak and barren streets about
The various cities of our world.

Love is the bringing of a magical
And heart warming spring.
Where the flowers are blooming
About the wild and bleak
Moors of the English countryside.

Love is the passion in which two people
Show upon their special and magical
Day, their wedding day. The start of a
New and fresh era.

Love is a garden which is bursting and teeming with
Life; roses are blossoming and birds are
Twittering most sweetly about the huge
Oak trees; suggesting that summer is
Here again in all its glory and joy.

We should treasure and cherish our
Gift of love which runs beautifully
Through our diverse world; for
It is one of many things that fills
Our world with joy and happiness.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emily Oldham 21 December 2008

A beautiful poem full of passion and emotion... keep writing, thanks Athena *** words will change the world ***

0 1 Reply
C.R. Clark 21 December 2008

A very good write indeed. It's true what they say 'love makes the world go around.' thanks for sharing this one, poet friend. Richard

1 0 Reply
Shilesha Johnson 21 December 2008

i loved the way you worded everything. a completely different yet great way of expressing what so many find it hard to. LOVE. this was a awesome poem. i loved it. a 10 for me! ! ! !

0 1 Reply
Desiree Burdick 21 December 2008

you describe love very well

0 1 Reply
Ivor Hogg 21 December 2008

love is indded all of these things and more

0 1 Reply
Lisa Anderson 02 February 2009

oh my god i like this poem and it reminhds me of how i am so in loive right now

0 1 Reply
Fred Romo 05 January 2009

'We should cherish and treasure the presence Of love amongst our world, for it is the Spectacular view of a beautiful sunset Upon a mid-summers dust' Wow...fantastic wording & expression, I actually printed this stanza out & have it on my wall of quotes. Great job! !

0 1 Reply
Eric Adams 04 January 2009

beautful to the end

0 1 Reply
Beth Hunt 30 December 2008

This is my fav of all poems so far. I'm more about the light and the spring but I can appreciate your dark side as well. Keep writing!

0 1 Reply
MuRdA RhEE 29 December 2008

Good Writing Dan....

0 1 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success