Treasure Island

Asif Baloch

(06-06-1978 / karachi)


one lip one touch
two bodies one soul
this is what is called love

Submitted: Monday, October 27, 2008
Edited: Monday, May 03, 2010

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  • Anjali Sinha (11/24/2008 6:34:00 AM)

    two hearts one beat
    one dream two greet
    I call this love

    what you say Asif?
    +++++++10 as always
    regards anjali (Report) Reply

  • Jim Valero (11/19/2008 7:50:00 PM)

    Very beautiful, suggestive poem. Each word does the job it must do. No superfluous, needless words. The lines suggest a deep, intimate union, a wholeness achieved through the comingling of the physical and the spiritual. Good job!

    (Only one linking verb needed: 'this is what IS called love.' (Report) Reply

  • Wali Jamali (11/6/2008 1:02:00 PM)

    beautifully wrapped up feeling.
    Dear Asif, Is your this poem according to the parameters of the haiko? i suspect it is not. please consult Mr. Yoonoos Peerbocus. (Report) Reply

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