Lost Existence Poem by Sara Hol

Lost Existence

Rating: 4.5


The grass melted
as the sea bled
into the sky

Time erased itself
becomming only
but a lie

The human race
hid beneath rock formations
condoning a pattern
to survive

The existence of the world
teetered
on the hot air
left behind

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valerie Dohren 19 February 2012

Love this poem - very imaginative and well written.

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John Carse 19 February 2012

Well rounded and excellent imagery. It just sings - loved it very much. Take a look at my poems. Would love to hear from you. Regards.

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