Lost Poem by Shouvik Roy

Lost

Rating: 5.0


I have lost you
In a dark island
Of lost hopes
And dreams,
Too dark to find you
As my eyes no more
Reflect your gleaming Flesh.

You came in autumn
And made me shed
The gloomy leaves
Off my soul,
They fell
To merge with
The beige earth,
Forever.

In summer I bore fruits
Of your love
And grew so tall,
But winter had to differ,
You veiled
Behind the snowy skies
And succumbed
To the dark;
Naked,
Leaving me
to shriek for your warmth
and to dry

But you were gone
So far,
I wish the dark was white
To see you,
Waving,
smiling
Standing afar,
Vowing to come back.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 10 July 2012

Playing seasons in emotion is a clever thing....i like the expression using these unique time...the seasons in hearts is more obvious than normal seasons around the skin...nice write :) _Unwritten SOul

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Oludipe Oyin Samuel 11 July 2012

carefully crafted! Keep it up, bro

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Kasia Fedyk 11 July 2012

I love the way you travel into seasons to breath this essence you bring. It is charming Shouvik!

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eloida Capuno 18 November 2012

Love this one, simply heartwarming

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The Reader 14 July 2012

You play with metaphors in an incredible ease!

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Elna Nel 13 July 2012

very beautifully written, good work!

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Ric Bastasa 13 July 2012

simple and yet superbly written...thanks

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Darkangel Flyfree 12 July 2012

I really like this one! I can feel your lost, such a powerful write! Keep it up Shouvik! ! !

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