Loss Poem by Cherise Thornhill

Loss

Rating: 4.5


Why did the creator take you?
I already knew what you'd be
A little girl with eyes like me
Got so excited having another
Cuz I know im a great mother
Your departure has left a hole
in our hearts.
Hope we can rebuild the parts.

Daddy wanted you so bad even
though he dont seem to be sad.
I know he's hurting just like me
He hides it really deep
He needs to let it all out
Letting the tears flow
Helps heal your soul

I miss you so much even though
I never felt your touch
I know we will all meet again
when the creator takes us all in! !

Friday, October 17, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Dedicate this poem to all the women who have misscariages
I wrote this after my last one.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Skati 17 October 2014

It's a great about a big loss. True feelings and emotions. I felt it. Thanks.

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