Marcquiese Burrell

Rookie - 230 Points (2/21/1987 / Baltimore, MD)

Loss - Poem by Marcquiese Burrell

Loss seem to bring a feeling of sorrow
Loss seem to make you feel hollow

Loss of someone close can make you shed tears
Loss of the opportunity to tell them you cared

Loss of the moment you could have created
Loss of the confidence because it faded

Loss of not ever getting to see their face
Loss of memories you wish not to embrace

Loss of the look in their eye
Loss of the feeling not to cry

Loss of a future, from a past you regret
Loss of a chance, you will now never get

Loss of a love that came with so much promise
Loss of a lover who you felt was very modest


Comments about Loss by Marcquiese Burrell

  • Rookie Joseph Sanchez (4/28/2014 10:48:00 AM)

    Loss of a future, from a past you regret
    Loss of a chance, you will now never get

    Loss of a love that came with so much promise
    Loss of a lover who you felt was very modest (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Awa Bah (4/8/2014 5:04:00 PM)

    very amazing poem
    all about loss
    amazing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Virginia Wolf (1/31/2014 3:20:00 PM)

    The poem is really amazing. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 16, 2014

Poem Edited: Friday, January 17, 2014


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