Loneliness Poem by GURDEV CHAUHAN

Loneliness

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Loneliness is an aged mother
sitting at the curve of time,
an ill-timed rain,
a thick winter evening,
the inner pain swelling,
the rail line trembling
after the train has passed,
a hand raised in farewell
for you or maybe

It is going
upstairs and looking
at the starless sky above,
and the grassless ground below

It is to get tired,
a book lying upside down,
a letter on a much-used table, unopened,
you know which what it says

It is to look out from
your window at the girls
with ice-cream cones
on the street below.
It is closing of the window
and switching on the TV

It is the disturbed kaw kaw
of the crow flying low over the roofs,
a familiar sound of
someone coughing
across the street bend,
the sounds coming and going
further down the street

Loneliness is an evening
stiffened like driftwood.

Friday, October 17, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It is based on what I experienced decades ago living in Chandigarh, a city in North India. It was a dull season and I was living alone at that time.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 17 October 2014

Loneliness is a beautiful mother, a lovely evening. Really wonderful composition and imagination. Beautiful poem shared on.

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Mohammad Skati 17 October 2014

It's a wonderful poem with a lot of pretty imagery. I loved it. Thanks.

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