Limerick- To The Proposed Girl's Father Poem by Valsa George

Limerick- To The Proposed Girl's Father

Rating: 4.9


"I have never seen him worried
And his actions are never hurried
Perfect in everyway
That's what I have to say
But sadly, thrice he has married"

Limerick- To The Proposed Girl's Father
Friday, August 7, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: limerick,marriage,opinion
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Eight syllables each in lines 1,2 and 5
Six syllables each in lines 3 and 4
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aarzoo Mehek 07 August 2020

Hahahaha the last punch line said it all. You made my day with this humorous limerick.10++

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Varsha M 07 August 2020

Perfect lemirick. Hahaha.

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Soran M. H 07 August 2020

Hello Dear poet; Thank you for this amazing Limerick, here the paradox has been used in the right place: perfect X thrice he has married= confused girl well done for this masterpiece 10/10

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Rajendran muthiah 07 August 2020

The doubt that is not cleared is to which wife’s daughter the boy has proposed. We laugh indeed.

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Anjandev Roy 07 August 2020

Perfect in every way.......well written.....thanks....anjandev roy.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 September 2020

Another well thought out limerick imbued with humor. Excellently presented with an amazing and humorous graphic. Brilliantly penned as always.

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Khairul Ahsan 25 August 2020

I love the humour I usually find in your brilliant limericks. This too is a great one, with an appropriate graphic at the end.

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Prabir Gayen 18 August 2020

I have never seen him worried And his actions are never hurried Perfect in everyway That's what I have to say But sadly, thrice he has married" . .... powerful

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Bri Edwards 17 August 2020

ok, no punctuation WILL work. ; ( You wouldn't be talkin' 'bout me, WOULD YOU. Oh yeah, ....i've been married 4 times, only divorced 3 times. And where did you get that photo of me? ! That's how i looked each time a woman said " Yes, I'll marry you! " What was i THINKING? ? What IS a " proposed girl's father" ? Not bad, V. bri ;)

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Mahtab Bangalee 10 August 2020

thrice married! ! - wonderful life without any tension!

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