Limerick- Thus Ended Their Dating Poem by Valsa George

Beautiful limerick, packed so tight.

Thank you for this delightful Limerick on Lovers, Valsa. The lovers are so immersed in each other, they are hardly aware of their surroundings. They can only see each other. :) ................ 10

A wonderful Limerick dear madam! Enjoyed the humor.....thanks for sharing.....10

Interesting Limerick Valsa.. There couldn't have been better place to be in. Enjoyed reading it.

Wow didn't know u could write limericks so well, wow this perfect funtastic poem shows u can write anything well. Super cool imaginative romance here lol grinning from ear to ear. Kudos.

For some, the ideal 'date'. The humour really comes through, Valsa. Very much appreciated.

I haven't seen a funnier limerick about the pleasures of being in the 'underworld'. Thanks, Valsa ji.

A limerick that says all limericks are not slap-stick, an enjoyable goodly read. And I notice two things; one, we both use limericks in different ways. Second, I too started writing poems only after 2000. Till then, ever since my Times of India days, I wrote serious non-fiction and the analytical stuff thru articles for Economic Times and other publications. But nothing can beat poetry.

It was as if they had deliberately planned their date inside a dark manhole, away from the prying eyes of curious cats! You have transformed a mere manhole to a romantic rendezvous.Lovely limerick!

This made me chuckle! A pleasure to read. Thanks, Valsa, for posting this.