Limerick- For Fear Of Robbers Poem by Valsa George

Limerick- For Fear Of Robbers

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He put all his possessions in a pack
Always carried it on his back
Seeing this strange act
Some followed him in his tract
He ran fearing thieves coming to attack

Tuesday, April 25, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: limerick
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 26 April 2017

This strange act! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 April 2017

Nice presentation on fear of robbers. Humorous one. Thanks...10

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Nosheen Irfan 26 April 2017

A very witty n humorous depiction of an irrational fear of robbers. Thanks for the big laugh Valsa. A10.

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Laughter is good for the soul! A simple but significant statement on the paralyzing effects of fear and rabid reality of living in a world with robbers.

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Akhtar Jawad 07 May 2018

Excess of everything is bad, to be too much careful may also bring miniseries. A great Limerick.

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Loke Kok Yee 13 May 2017

Oh! I thought that was fun 'twas fear that made him run Not robbers acting strange Just he that was derange For threats there was but none

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Valsa George 14 May 2017

Inspired by my limerick, you have written an excellent limerick, Loke....! Thank you!

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Queeny Gona 05 May 2017

Ah! Tragedy of life! fears following man, man chased after fearful thoughts!

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Bri Edwards 27 April 2017

well tract could work here. i was wondering about track, but i don't see where he is, so i can't really say for sure what fits better. hmm? i like the rhyming. the story works for me as well. i wish the guy good luck! bri :)

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