Lights Poem by chaos unknown

Lights



when the lights are yung
its july 4th and you hear gun shots
and babies crying its a new year
...

its cold and the wind goes thru your jeans u see green blue and red ligths u dont have enough money for what u need
children dreams are broken
if ur 13 or older u are on your on and nobody cares
food is scarce your hungry and u know whats right but u do wrong..
your drunk in the middle of the summer your eye vison is blury
and u forgot what the time is farther time lied and u tried to make time but u coulndt thinking about mixed seasons the temperture is seasonal
....
when the lights shine off and its my turn to settle down promise me that u will sing about me

Monday, December 15, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: poetry
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
a baby that was born on july fourth indepedece day a kid standing in the cold weather and he feeels clueless
a summer bum who drinks on his past
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 15 December 2014

....farther time lied and u.... .......... could you have meant father time? ? i found this captivating, and not just because of the many (intentional? ? ?) english errors, and despite, i think, hidden meanings. welcome to PH. thanks for sharing. if you submit another, give me a shout so i can look at it. please? bri :)

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