Light Of Innocence Poem by Jacqueline Louw

Light Of Innocence

Rating: 5.0


A new day is here and im aware
of new opportunities, challenges
the bliss of being alive
and all my thoughts i want to share

Growing up was tough
with obstacles and a road so rough

But trough it all
from a girl to a woman
changes i made no matter how small

I realized in my life one thing stayed
this thing of brilliance
the light of innocence

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
1khmerking Kampuchea 21 October 2008

Great poem! ! ! A 10 from me! Wonderful poem about how you manage to face difficulty big or small. Your poem about how your mind is brilliance in a way that you made yourself stayed innocent through hard time and rough roads. When oppunity comes, you chanllenge it and you earn your chance of another oppunity to grow, just as you were a child had grown into a women through challenging time. Great work, always enjoying your poem! ! ! Kept on writing! ! !

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