Light And Happiness Poem by Ash Flame
Light And Happiness
Light between dark
follow the light and it becomes a spark
happiness feels all over
You remember the candies caught over
Going outside with your with your friends
you're playing so much it feels like it has no end
the sun goes down it's getting late
You wanna stay outside but your hungry and mom has prepared a juicy steak
You say goodbye to your companions but they still wanna play
All of ya'll go inside to eat
while you're eating you think about the next day
the day is over time to dream
You go to bed straight to sleep
It is so true. Keep on playing and you'll see what tomorrow brings. Bien!
LIGHT AND HAPPINESS is a wonderful poem! You describe those fun times when everyone is the neighborhood is your friend and everyone plays together. There's no arguing or cheating to win - just an overall sense of sharing. I also like the quiet ending with the speaker close to falling asleep and looking forward to more of the same fun. This is a very positive poem and we need celebrate these good experiences. Because life also includes nightmare experiences as you showed in SERPENTINE ABYSS. There's a balance you achieve in writing both kinds of poems, but you already seem to understand that. PS Sure, we can collaborate! Although I think on the basis of these two poems you're doing fine on your own. But just send me something you want my input.
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5/10/2024 9:12:41 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Dear Ash, lovely feelings of the children is portraited here. Thanks. 'Teenagers’ Passion' .............................. .......................