Life Unbelievable Poem by Thando Mashinini

Life Unbelievable

Rating: 4.5


Life is a circle,
Life is a miracle,
Life is challenge
It is strength dependent,
Life is a rotation
That comes back with some kind of production,

It teaches you addition
But sometimes rewards you deduction,
It is bigger than the bigest mountain
That when you climb up there you feel the pain
But when you come again you feel the rain,

Life laying living longing for the latest lamboghin,
Life so desperate to destroy and diminish the devil
Demon diabolic dilemmas,

Life is so confusing that no one can have a prediction
But can only have education,
And with my quotation: life from monday to sunday
Must be like life from oneday to dream day,

Life with gratitude
That it describes a fellow man's attitude,
Turning, tumbling tremendously that Tom and Tim
Do not tend to tenaciously talk to the tenants for the take.

Life so huge and great
That no one can rate
But can only debate,
And only G.O.D can re-create.

Life so wonderful,
Life incredible,
Life unpredictable,
Life unbelievable!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Thabo Rasego 12 April 2012

Love it. Life is what you take it to be! Life is what teaches man to be! Strive and drive for Life

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Ekaterina M. Polischuk 12 February 2012

your poem has a great melody... words make t think and to see our way if living... it`s not just good poem. it`s amazing one. i really enjoyed while reading. bravo... keep it up. Hope we can read more in future. you are a true talent.

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Young Church Poetry 08 February 2012

Thando you got writing skills and we need more of your poems, life is a beautiful journey. Good work brother.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 05 January 2012

Super nice poem, i echoe Vipins my friend...'life is a gift from God...awesome.

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Vipins Puthooran 28 December 2011

Life is a gift from our God! ! A good poem! ! ! excellent thoughts! ! ! Really a wonderful penning! ! !

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