Life Is Unfair Poem by annabelle grace

Life Is Unfair

Rating: 5.0


I lost love
She wins love

I lost my dreams
She lives with her dreams

I lost my happiness
She has all the happiness

I am broke
She has grown

Is that how life could offer?
Love is all I know

Still, life doesn't favor me.


(04-14-07)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stug Jordan 14 April 2007

This is beautifully said, Annabelle, despite it being sad. It's bitter, without sounding bitter, does that make sense? S x

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