Life Is Good Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Life Is Good

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Wife is partner
A real carrier
Of pain and agony
When shared with no pity

She is not slave
But brave
Wheel of cart
For good to start

She is not meant for any kind of insult
The relation must equal and well built
On trust and confidence for future
It must be respected and made sure

Male and female are really supplement
For good relation and further moment
The life journey is carried on with mutual accommodation
It is beginning of good behavior and relation

Sometimes females are subjected to torture
Not granted good treatment and honor
Such families are not happy at all
They invite nature’s wrath and fall

Working ladies deserve attention
They have to work as well as maintain relation
Under such condition male partner must cooperate
Stand side by side and help at any rate

There is likelihood of some bitterness
But it can be kept away with no stress
Little understanding may help at great extent
Life is otherwise good and needs no adverse comment

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 January 2014

Wife is partner A real carrier

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 January 2014

It is ok Sara Murphy3 minutes ago It is apparent that the author's English is not quite perfected as the whole piece has a fragmented and choppy flow. The sentimental mood is quite nice and comes through regardless. Good start. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 January 2014

Ok krishna Middela38 minutes ago Ok

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 January 2014

Hasmukh Mehta welcome Susan Payton Yates like this. a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 January 2014

Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh! 6 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 January 2014

surekha.[ mem.. buhj sunder

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 January 2014

noel elnol beautiful...and nice poem

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 January 2014

hussain smelter nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 January 2014

Very beautiful and tender! a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 January 2014

Very beautiful and tender! a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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