Life As We Know It Poem by Swechha Naik

Life As We Know It

Rating: 4.8


On the sands of a rocky beach
lay a boat docked against the waves,
tied to a trunk, moss-covered and drenched
it remained with the trunk, battling against the relentless waves,
The trunk stood its ground, as it always has had
it held on to the boat, no matter how far the waves towed,
the boat was bound to the trunk, it knew its place
The good old trunk never let go,
lest the waves would win and take the boat away
and who knew, leave it abandoned mid-sea
But there comes a day in everyone's life
when they can't go on,
when another lash becomes one too much
and that is when we lose to life
That'd be when the trunk gives in to the waves
and the boat floats away..

Thursday, July 28, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: heart song,heartache,wondering
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Because, you know, the highs and lows of life: ')
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 20 November 2017

A refined poetic imagination, Swechha. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Dr Antony Theodore 28 July 2016

The good old trunk never let go, lest the waves would win and take the boat away...... the trustworthy character of the old trunk always supporting the boat tossed by the waves is an allegorical example of trust, love and the care in times of need......... we as humans can learn a lot from this old trunk.......... thank you.

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Swechha Naik 01 August 2016

Yes, that's what I thought too..you're welcome :)

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Gajanan Mishra 28 July 2016

good old truck never let go, I like it.

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 July 2016

It knew its place. Nice work.

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